Sunday, May 27, 2012

Blob

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Boom! I heard a tsunami storming right at me and I am so scared ah! They were coming right at me. I didn't know what to do! So I went zooming across the bumpy grass! I did my extraordinaire slid and then I stopped. I can not hardy breathe. There were only a few kids left in the game and they went nuts so I tried to do my ickstrodaner move. I sadly failed and besides that I got Samuel's shoe right in my snozzle which meant I was in as well. We all looked around and we saw a few people in. They looked like they were going to pee there pants. We ran up and we got them and we went back inside.   
Posted by Anonymous at Sunday, May 27, 2012
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10 comments:

  1. AnonymousMay 28, 2012 at 9:14 AM

    Awesome blob story its.

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  2. AnonymousMay 28, 2012 at 9:16 AM

    Cool Dan

    Your description is awesome.
    I really liked how you did a Ickstrodaner move.

    :)Courts

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  3. AnonymousMay 30, 2012 at 9:03 AM

    Great Dan
    I like the sentence where it says
    Boom! I heard a tsunami storming right at me and I am so scared ah! They were coming right at me.
    What made you think of that sentence?

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  4. AnonymousMay 30, 2012 at 1:50 PM

    well Katrina I looked at the paper about 1 ore 2 years ago and I couldn't be-leave that I still remember.

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  5. AnonymousMay 31, 2012 at 9:01 AM

    awesome story Dan and funny how it says they almost pee their pants.

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  6. AnonymousJune 1, 2012 at 8:55 AM

    Wow Daniel.
    Your writing is great.
    What is your favourite part of your writing?

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    1. AnonymousJune 1, 2012 at 9:46 PM

      well parris my Favorited part is. I'm going to do my extraordinary slide.

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    2. Mr MoriartyJune 17, 2012 at 7:22 PM

      I love the extraordinary slide too, Daniel. Well done!

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