This is my Comic life. I hope you like it.
Here is my writing could The dare-devil slide
I was high in the air, then out of the blue I see a extraordinary slide. I Feel like I will puke in one or two seconds 1 2 oh not yet wops. I am going down The daredevil slide I get pounded by a bucket of wind and a bit of water in my face somehow. I carry on down the freezing slide on my then bam! i get hit by a pile of leaves in my face I say I can't see I can't see where am I going I am freaking out right now AHHH!!. I have 5 more minutes until I break the world record!.
I have done it I have broke a new world record, all my family and friends were there I was overwhelmed with this excitement flowing through my body.